Thursday, January 18, 2007

Literaturepage.com Analysis

During class, we had a look at Literaturepage.com and we compared its version of Macbeth with the Oxford version of Macbeth. We analyzed the prime differences in layout, punctuation, stage direction, and language, and discovered that much of the text deferred from the Oxford version on Literaturepage.com. Our conclusion: this is a horrible interpretation of the original Macbeth text.

In terms of appearance, the page itself is visually unappealing and is difficult to read. The font is difficult to focus on as it is bland and there is a large flashing "banner" across the top that shows Uncle Sam asking us to “TAKE A BRIEF SURVEY”. The lines are not numbered making it hard to follow sometimes and to find your place. The background is large and white, almost blinding, and the page itself becomes difficult to look at for more than a few seconds. Also, the lines are all left justified, destroying whatever meter Shakespeare intended for his play; as a modern day audience, unless we are explicitly shown the meter arranged in an obvious way, we will not get it.

This site contains many differences in punctuation from the Oxford edition, as well. These changes are mostly quite minor and do not change the scene too drastically. The most common change in punctuation is the addition of commas; this was probably done because the writer felt that the passage needed a pause to add to the dramatic effect. Another common punctuation change was the use of apostrophes in the place of the vowel ‘e’ when used in the past tense of a verb. Although this language may be considered elaborate in a way (the way people used to talk before), this change may make it harder for some readers to understand the text. In comparison to this, the Oxford text edition contain page numbers for every 10 lines, and do no use the apostrophe to replace the letter ‘e’ in verbs as often. As a result, it is easier to follow, and understand, in contrast with the Literaturepage.com version.

The stage directions immediately differ from the Oxford text edition and are also separated from the actual text, hidden in a header that is difficult to find without examining the page for longer than seems necessary. The text tells us that the witches "exeunt," but this page tells us that the "witches vanish." The use of the different words creates different moods (the use of the word ‘vanish’ is more mysterious). Furthermore, stage directions are not italicized, making it hard to distinguish them from the text. In addition, in contrast with the Oxford edition, the appearance of two minor characters is altered. In the Oxford edition, both Ross and Angus enter together towards the middle of the scene; Ross, in the online editions, does not enter until almost the end of the scene, and Angus doesn’t show up at all.

Hopefully, this website will not be around in two months, let alone five years. It’s a terrible resource: difficult to read, with odd uses of apostrophes and strange spellings, and a poor layout without numbered lines. The text has been ‘butchered’ to an extent, deferring greatly from the Oxford edition of the book that we are familiar with. All in all, it is a dreadful resource.

5 comments:

UTS MacMedia Group 1 said...

Literaturepage.com seems to have the same text version as that of sparknotes.
I think that your inclusion of the advertisement on the page was a nice idea, as it definitely isn't something that occurs in the book, and it would be very distracting. This was a good choice, as it's something that normally wouldn't be focused on, being something specific to the site, not the text.
The text (of your post thing) reads very fluently, and is very engaging and interesting. The use of more exaggerated phrasing worked well (you probably weren't -that- horrified, and from what you commented on, it doesn't quite warrant dissapearing in two months either). It was amusing to read, however. I'd include here what Ms. Stoyka said we should all (not) write, but I kind of forgot =)

UTS MacMedia Group 1 said...

Thank you for your very clear and concise analysis of the Literaturepage.com version of the text. Much of what you say is true: the distracting, white background; the omission and addition of various punctuation marks; and, for which I commend your observation, the flashing advertisement that is distracting and takes away from the authenticity of the version. Your analysis is separated into several distinguished parts, which aids in its simplicity and readability. Overall, great analysis.

--Jordan Sugarman

The Burning Effigies said...

I agree that Literaturepage.com does indeed have a horrible layout, which takes away from the actual text. I also found that the commas were very distracting, and created too many pauses. As for most of the other comments, I did not notice them upon first glance, but after examining the Literaturepage.com version more closely, seemed true as well.

I found the analysis very easy to read and follow. The verdict of the site, "a horrible interpretation of the original Macbeth text", seems a little exaggerated though. To me, there are some inaccuracies, but they are not horrible...

-Pamela

group10 said...
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group10 said...

I agree that literaturepage.com is indeed a bad site for reading Macbeth. The first thing I saw when I went to their website was the confusing layout and the uncle sam banner on the top. The punctuation changes on the website don't bother me that much except for the additional commas. I wasn't as bothered by stage directions though but I dont think that they should have been added in as they draw away from the original text.

Overall, your analysis was quite detailed and thorough. I agree with you, literaturepage.com is an awful resource.

-Farheen